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so warm my heart with your touch
to look my way and smile
such a wonder is your love
saddness in my eyes while distant
the sweetness of such torture
to everyday speak but unable touch
to greet the day with salted tears
while you sleep so far away

two opposites yet rather same
the night as to day
the negative to possitive
my darkness to your light

oh the rains would cease
and the joyful song of love let sing
if the rest of my breaths
my lasting heartbeats
let me wake and greet the day
next with you, every morning smiles
see your face as the first waking sight
©2005-2008 ~Sellestia
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Submitted: October 26, 2005
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I may move this one to scraps, not sure really, I worked on it some last night at work, it's unfinished to me when I read it back to myself, so I'll add onto it possibly. As usual i've written better, but I don't really like going for a long time without putting somthing up like i've been doing. Anywho, Hi! Thanks for reading, don't hate it too much ^_^;
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*rej-:iconrej-: Oct 26, 2005, 2:29:23 PM
I like the musicality in this poem! It flows in some parts and is broken in other.. I think it fits the meaning and the feelings you want to express :)

--
To see a world in a Grain of Sand,
And a Heaven in a Wild Flower,
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
(William Blake)
*aseariel:iconaseariel: Oct 27, 2005, 4:12:41 PM
:rose:

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when life gives me lemons, i prefer to squirt it in the eye with lemon juice. :3
~GoldenGift:iconGoldenGift: Oct 28, 2005, 2:46:51 AM
Lyricaly and beautiful. I love the first stanza. Actually the whole poem, even just the idea behind it. I look forward to the "adding-ons". :clap:
~Sellestia:iconSellestia: Oct 28, 2005, 8:29:31 AM
Thank you, all three of you ^^;
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